Hey Juanita I really like how you did your layout and it is so clear to read. I really like how your group worked collaborative together, and how you guys did a retell of Little Red Riding Hood. Jessie
Hey Juanita, I like how you hook me in you story and used a lot of dialogue. I couldn't see how the wood cutter came inside the room I think you need to improve that. Keep up the awesome work
Hey Juanita I really like how you did your layout and it is so clear to read. I really like how your group worked collaborative together, and how you guys did a retell of Little Red Riding Hood. Jessie
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Hey Juanita
I really like how you did your layout and it is so clear to read. I really like how your group worked collaborative together, and how you guys did a retell of Little Red Riding Hood.
Jessie
Hey Juanita,
I like how you hook me in you story and used a lot of dialogue. I couldn't see how the wood cutter came inside the room I think you need to improve that.
Keep up the awesome work
Hey Juanita
I really like how you did your layout and it is so clear to read. I really like how your group worked collaborative together, and how you guys did a retell of Little Red Riding Hood.
Jessie
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