LI: To write a stretched sentence
Who:The little boy
What:The little boy jogged
When: When the day was coming to an end the little boy jogged
Where:When the day was coming to an end, the little boy jogged to his friends house
Why:When the day was coming to an end, the little boy jogged to his friends house for a sleepover.
When the day was coming to an end, the little boy jogged to his friends house for a sleepover.
As the day was coming to an end, the little boy jogged over to his friends house for a sleepover.
My group and I have been doing stretching sentence we have been learning to DRAFT. I think my group and I have successfully done well. We need to learn to make it better. The one in the black is the one that is not draft and the one in the green is draft.
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