Me and my buddy June were writing an orientation about four men running away from the bear while they were filming. We are practicing our writing skills. We had to look at the picture and get idea from the photo.
Well done Juanita and June. Your orientation clearly tells us the setting, characters and problem. Your use of dialogue hooks me in and makes me want to keep reading. Your choice of adjectives helps to enhance the mood and scariness of the bear.
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Well done Juanita and June. Your orientation clearly tells us the setting, characters and problem. Your use of dialogue hooks me in and makes me want to keep reading. Your choice of adjectives helps to enhance the mood and scariness of the bear.
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