“There was money everywhere!" said Afu. She then picked it up and went around asking people “Does this money belong to you?” She was running to see if anyone owned this cash. She was running as fast as a cheater. As night fell Afu was getting pretty angry. She then decided to leave the money at her house to spend with her family and herself “BOOM YAH!, Money money.” Yelled Afu.
I have created a quick write for writing. I have been practicing my DRAFT. (Delete, Arrange, Add, Fix and Talk)
I have tried to make sure that it make sense and it has the right punctuation.
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